Thursday 18 June 2020

Matariki Report Writting T2W10

For the past 3-4 weeks Team Toroa and I have been learning how to write a report about Matariki.
I found it easy to find sites to help write my Matariki report because there were lots of helpful sites and they all had AMAZING information to help me.
I found it challenging to find the right information for my paragraphs I choose.

4 comments:

  1. Kia ora Grace, I liked the way that you made your writing stand out on the page. You taught me a lot about Matariki. Maybe next time you could make the background less darker.Ka Pai To Mahi Grace!
    From Kristie-lee.

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    1. Kia Ora Kristie-lee.
      Thank you for the helpful feedback!
      Next time I will try and find a lighter background :D
      Thank you for the helpful comment.
      -Grace

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  2. Kia Ora Grace,
    I really liked your writing because you said all the information you know about Matariki. You taught me more about Matariki because some of the information on your report I did not know. Next time you could recheck your sentences.
    From Rivyenne

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    1. Kia Ora Rivyenne,
      Thank you for your helpful comment!
      Later in the day I will go back and look at my sentences on my Matariki slide.
      Thank you for the wonderful comment!
      From Grace

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